Can anyone correct my errors with english?

In my country there are various environmental problems and pollution. Especially in large cities there is much smog which often results in high humidity. Another problem is the garbage, because incinerators are not well distributed throughout the country. I think a solution to this problem can be found from each of the inhabitants, who can engage in diversified harvest and can avoid using the car for short distances, moving by bike or by bus. The government can solve the problem of garbage trying to distribute more fairly the incinerators.



Thanks! :DCan anyone correct my errors with english?In my country there is pollution and other environmental problems. Particularly in large cities, large amounts of smog often results in high humidity. Another problem is garbage, because incinerators are not well distributed throughout the country. I think a solution to this problem can be found if everyone engaged in a diversified harvest and avoided using cars for short distances. Instead, they should travel by bike or by bus. The government can solve the problem of garbage trying to distribute the incinerators more fairly.



A few comments - your English is 99% correct but to a native English speak it's just a little bit on the clumsy side. This is probably due to the structure of your native language. You should avoid the word "can" - it means that it's possible to do something, but not necessarily that someone should.



Your English is already better than most of the native English speakers here. Keep up the outstanding work, English isn't a very easy language to learn!Can anyone correct my errors with english?In my country there are various environmental problems and pollution. In large cities especially there is a high level of smog which often results in high humidity. Another problem is that of disposal of garbage in certain area. This is partly because incinerators are not well distributed throughout the country and also due to issues of recycling and redistribution of waste.

There are several actions which can be implemented in order to help find a solution to this problem. Inhabitants of the country can be encouraged to engage in diversified harvest and requested to limit their use of the car for short distances, instead moving by bike or by bus. The government can help solve the problem of garbage trying to distribute the incinerators for effectively and encouraging the recycling and re-use of packaging.



hope this helps..Can anyone correct my errors with english?I'd add a comma between 'cities' and 'there'.



'I think a solution to this problem can be found from each of the inhabitants, who can engage in diversified harvest and can avoid using the car for short distances, moving by bike or by bus.'



I think a solution to this problem depends on the citizens. They can engage in diversified harvesting and avoid using the car for short distances, instead, they can opt to travel by bicycle or by bus.



'The government can solve the problem of garbage trying to distribute more fairly the incinerators.'

The government can solve the problem of garbage/pollution by ensuring a more even distribution of incinerators.



Hope it helped!Can anyone correct my errors with english?
replace the word "garbage" with "waste".



in the first sentence, try "there are various problems with pollution and with the environment".



omit "especially".



"I think a solution to this problem can be found from each of the inhabitants, who can engage in diversified harvest and can avoid using the car for short distances, moving by bike or by bus" this needs to be rephrased slightly.

try "the country's inhabitants could help to make a change by engaging in diversified harvest and by limiting usage of cars, instead travelling by bicycle or on public transport".



the last sentence needs rephrasing slightly; "the government can help solve the problem of waste by trying to distribute the incinerators more evenly".





overall your english is very good, only it's slightly jumbled. keep up the good work!